Hey Boriss.
Very nice, it is indeed improved. I myself spotted only 2 minor things. "Milky way" is incorrect, it is supposed to be Milky Way
and the second witch kinda caught my eye was: "The only energy source capable of powering this hulking monstrosity is an actual black hole, making the deployment of Supergates very expensive and allows enemies to easily locate them."
I think it should be "The only energy source capable of powering this hulking monstrosity is an actual black hole, making the deployment of Supergates very expensive and allow
ing enemies to easily locate them."
I know I know, it is just a minor nitpick but I thought to mention it
Great work.