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09 Oct 2018 15:27 - 09 Oct 2018 15:29 #89194 by Boriss
Yeah, the thing is tho. Symbiote is not correct name since goa´uld are, by their nature, parasitical and not symbiotic. Tok´ra you can call symbiotes but goa´uld behave as an exceptional example of parasite.
As for the Zat´n´kitel... the reason why I changed it is because everybody knows it by the nickname O´Neill gave it, the zat gun. On a unit using zat gun as their primary weapon you can write "The Zat´n´kitel, nicknamed the Zat gun by O´Neill, is an energy based weapon used for stunning enemy rather than outright killing them." but on descriptions of ability it will make the reading more complicated and my goal is to keep the description as simple as possible so that even people with limited knowledge of english language will be able to understand the text.
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09 Oct 2018 15:36 #89195 by Jack Hunter
Good point. Using Zat for ability descriptions is okay. We have to see what fits better to the respective description to see if we use parasite or symbiote. They may not have a real symbiotic nature, but as far as I know symbiote is cannon and parasite is more a general phrase. However, let's see.

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09 Oct 2018 15:37 #89196 by Locutus
In the show, the Goa'uld larva was always referred to as "symbiote" despite being parasitic in nature.
So please stick with the terminus introduced by the series.

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09 Oct 2018 16:31 - 09 Oct 2018 16:33 #89198 by Boriss
Okey, Goa´uld will be referred to as symbiotes.
And the Zat gun dilema?
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13 Oct 2018 18:17 #89224 by Klon
Please feel free to add comments about Patch 2.1.1 here as well. ;)



Wer daran denkt aufzugeben hat es in Wirklichkeit schon längst getan!
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26 Oct 2018 19:39 #89295 by Boriss
Worked some more on this grammar check file. Red is new one, green are old ones and other colours are reworked old ones. I changed that Ba´al description a bit more than just the minimum grammar check. See if you like it or if you would prefer the original version of that description.
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27 Oct 2018 11:00 #89297 by Klon
Very nice mate! Jack Hunter will have a look at it as soon as possible. :)
Btw.: You should check your PMs. ;)



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27 Oct 2018 14:49 #89300 by Jack Hunter
Thanks, Boriss, I will add it as soon as possible. Your last changes are already in the newest public patch. ;)

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29 Oct 2018 14:43 #89301 by Boriss
I have changed Ba´al´s description to this:
To save his own hide, Ba´al agreed to serve Anubis as his second in command. 2 squadrons of Anubis gliders are stationed in its hangar, ready to support their mothership when necessary. To this end Anubis ordered a special hatak be made for Ba´al. With enhanced ship systems and additional armaments aboard, including 2 squadrons of gliders, Ba´al´s new vessel instills fear in the hearts of his masters enemies, while its "captain" plots to overthrow his master.

It is just an attempt to give some heroic units the character that they have in the series. Do you like it like this or do you prefer the short original variant? Want to know your opinion since similar longer descriptions were already in the original before I started my checking, especially for the ancients heroes.

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29 Oct 2018 15:11 #89302 by Jack Hunter
Yeah, sounds not bad. However, I will let the German text as it is.

Btw. let's continue in the Freelancer Board, you should have already access.

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